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    PostSubject: Feedback for stories.   Feedback for stories. Icon_minitimeWed Jan 12, 2011 7:54 am

    Well unlike some the most trouble I have with my story writing other then how I'd love for everything to go peacefully is what other people think of them and often because of this reason I rarely write and only do role-plays because for me its easier. I feel safe enough here that I am acutally writing a story and though like as the saying is, we are our own worst critics I decided to get some outside opinions on the link below

    https://bitten.rpg-board.net/t438-the-crash-of-atra-lupus-de-sousa#7854

    Any feedback if you read it and criticism is very much welcomed and I like to know what parts you did and didn't like this far on.



    Wayha

    I loved the story and I really really wanna know if you will continue it in a way.
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    PostSubject: Re: Feedback for stories.   Feedback for stories. Icon_minitimeThu Jan 13, 2011 6:30 am

    i am planning on it i am having trouble figuring out the fight scene though....
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